Day 24 – 30 Day Writing Challenge [AnYi]

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Put your favorite poem through a translator into a different language and then back again. Do this until the poem is no longer recognizable. Rewrite it and turn it into lyrics for a song.


Let it Rain

(Cover: 处处吻)

(You can find my drastic attempt at singing here.)

Don’t listen to the rain when it falls
Don’t fall for lies whenever they call
They never said it was that easy
But smokes and mirrors were your fantasy
 
You wanna wake up in the spring
Wanna see them all, wanna climb to the top
But you’ll need to give up everything
Nowhere to hide, you have no one at all
 
Let it rain
Let them drain you from the core
Let them leave you on the shore
Let them give you everything
Before they take away it all
Let them have your mind all cleared
Let them kill your darlings dear
They will keep your heart in here
Till it breaks and disappears
 
Give your blood and tears
To all their jailers
Burn your hopes and fears
At all their altars
 
Maybe they can’t control the weather
Maybe they want you to do better
They test your strength to make you braver
But you’re a bird of a different feather 
 
You wanna wake up in the spring
Wanna see them all, wanna climb to the top
But you’ll need to give up everything
Nowhere to hide, you have no one at all
Let it rain,
Let them drain you from the core
Let them leave you on the shore
Let them give you everything
Before they take away it all
Let them have your mind all cleared
Let them kill your darlings dear
They will keep your heart in here
Till it breaks and disappears
 
Oh, you always were the dreamer
They tear your soul apart
You still had to start
To self-fulfill all your prophecies
No time to heal your scars
Be their counterpart
 
Let it rain, let it rain,
Let it rain and rain and rain
Till it’s another spring
(they give you everything)
It will rain, let it rain,
Till the memories start to sting
You can untie your strings
 
Let it rain
Let them drain you from the core
Let them leave you on the shore
Let them give you everything
Before they take away it all
Let them have your mind all cleared
Let them kill your darlings dear
They will keep your heart in here
Till it breaks and disappears
 
Let it rain, let it rain
Let it rain and rain and rain
Till it’s another spring
(they give you everything)
Let it rain, let it rain,
Let it rain and rain and rain
Till it’s another spring
(they give you everything)
Let it rain, let it rain,
Let them take up everything

*The original poem is Ding Feng Bo by Su Shi. (《定风波》 苏轼)

* Check out a proper English translation of the poem here by Betty Tseng!



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